Tuesday, 15 March 2016

OUGD503 FEVER TREE FEEDBACK

Work on show:


Bottle wrap design.

Potential poster.

Question one:
I've produced a bottle wrap design, should I produce any other outcomes/show the bottles on any platforms? (I've started on a billboard poster but am unsure about it)

Answers:
Possibly mock the bottles up on a table or similar
Mock it up in a few settings
Shop shelf?
In context, bar or shop maybe?
On a shelf or a table with glasses
Mock up maybe? Might be nice using the design in a small amount on a billboard
On a sleeve or as mock up billboard
Bottles mocked up on a table/shelf will make it look more realistic as it looks a little flat as is

Questions two:
The patterns are based on key buildings from each country, what do you think of them?

Answers:
They replicate well and are memorable
I didn't really notice what they were until I read this but they look very iconic
Recognisable and distinct to the brand
Nice concept will be fairly unique against all other entries
Really nice - it's subtle as it blends like pattern. However it makes people look twice to engage which is good!
They are cute, possibly not all clear but I don't think that matters
Very nicely illustrated, they give a very high styled standard to them
Love the pattern, however I did not realise the green/red ones were buildings at first - might be a good thing though as it makes you look twice. Could you swap the colour of the green one with another colour as it seems to resemble a tree more than anything else?

Question three:
I'm struggling with how to present the final bottles digitally...what would you suggest?

Answers:
Perhaps looking online for some photorealistic bottle mockups
Find a glass bottle mock up? Wine bottle maybe
Print out and stick on actual bottles (although there's not much time left)
You can buy the bottle from Morrison's
Time wise what you have is good but if you got time mock it up for real
Mock up on a computer as many ways as you can first as back up, then if you have time try and mock them up for real
Would look nice photoshopped on a shelf or something to give it some dimension

Evaluation:
This feedback has been really useful to give me more of a knowledge of what to do with presenting my work, and has given me confidence in my designs, whilst showing me that I don't need to physically make anything else, just show my designs in different areas. The next stage will be to find a realistic and appropriate glass bottle mock up that I can use, or figure out how to use the 3D tool on Illustrator, as last time I used it it kind of destroyed my mac for a bit.

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